sábado, 5 de febrero de 2011

Wordy Sentences - Guided practice

Adam Smith, founder of modern economics, proposed a theory that made controversial. This economist educated in England, wrote the first study of political economy. The Wealth of Nations published in the same year that Americans declared their independence from England in 1776. Smith’s book pointed out and directed attention to the interdependence of freedom, order, economic processes and free trade laws. His influence during his lifetime did not affect economic than in the next century. “The invisible hand” and “laissez-faire” are synonymous with Smith’s names. Some people will say “He was a good man- he really understood how business works!” and others “He was an evil man- really sold the average citizen down the river”. Both reactions are extreme, but indicate controversy aroused by Smith’s ideas is still alive.   

5 comentarios:

  1. Very concise and with a picture and everythinh lol!! great job!

    ResponderEliminar
  2. Is a good idea to put the number of words that the exercise has in order to know how much you reduced

    ResponderEliminar
  3. Hey! The article is a bit... confusing.
    You reduced wella and stuff, but you lack of coherence as well.
    Your method is interesting, it is concise as Kelvin said for example in the sentence "His influence during his lifetime did not affect economic than in the next century." (than) is wrong, but if you put (as) it would be ok and the meaning not lost...
    Very interesting, just a little more attention...
    It was a pleasure to check your blog ;)

    ResponderEliminar
  4. hiii fabii!, it is a well-intentioned article, i would recommend you to check the phrase `proposed a theory that made controversial´. It is missing information there. see you.. :)

    ResponderEliminar
  5. Dear Fabiola,
    I agree with your classmates.

    Reg.

    ResponderEliminar